Thanks but not sure where your getting loops , everything you hear I created using no loops as you put it .
Maybe it sounds that way to you , I used Rapture to create some of what you hear and some other sequencer sounds but that's pretty much it .
Thanks for the comments , cheers !

Hi J.S.
 
I enjoyed this very much. Great recording, well defined and good separation with air.  I am new to this critiquing thing so I hope that translates to something meaningful. The start scared the @&$#! out  of me. Eager to hear more. Well done.

Thanks MCi for the listen and comments , yea that rooster crowing sort has a frightening effect on the listener I guess . LOL
Right now I'm trying to wrap my head around some lyrics for Steves song I created for him but it's slow going right now , it's been years writing any lyrics or adding in my own vocals .
Have some ideals and how I want my vocals to sound , it's making it happen that counts .
Hopefully by mid May it will be completely finished for him , I talked to him from Florida where he lives with his daughter and grand child and he was asking me when is the song to be finished and I told him soon I hope but if you want I can mail you the music and he replied with I will wait so I guess I better get moving ! LOL

Hi James, nice and mellow track, well done.
 
Rik

Thanks Rikkie for the listen and comments

Mix comes across well here James, nice and balanced, thanks for sharing.

Hey thanks Wookie , did you checkout my other new song called Betty Lu , thanks for the comments .

James

Sounds good James. Steady all the way through. Enjoyed hearing this. 

Listened a second time James, you've really made strides on your mixes and playing. I get it, it's groove music. 
 
Although I think this tune needs something, not sure, maybe a GREEN type of sound..... I'm pickled just thinking of what that sound might be......... 
 
LOL!!! I'm kidding man, Great work!!! Keep on keepin' on my friend!!! 
 
 
 

Boy, do I love reverb!  It makes the relatively sparse arrangement sound huge while adding a mysterious undertone.  I take the rooster to be kind of a wake up call.  You've managed to juxtapose some interesting moods in a very creative way.  Well done.