Excellent song/performances and mix.
Your daughter has a fantastic voice with plenty of character - sounds like a hit to me. Great job

Thank you all so much for your kind comments...  the ending is still a bit wonky to me, but after listening to it 534592845982345987656 times I have no perspective anymore.  Her vocal is a tiny bit too loud thanks for noting that.  There is reverb on her voice, but I normally set the pre-delay quite high so the singer is sitting on your shoulder sitting into your ear with a trail of reverb following it... I will adjust the pre-delay down a tiny bit and thanks for noting this.

This is a really beautiful piece.  Close and quiet vocals executed perfectly, very impressive.  The lyrics are *real*, and I love that and they moved me close to tears.  Very well done. 

Thank you so much Voda... I got a rather tepid...well okay actually a bad response from people I know, so thought Id done something wrong... only I had no idea what that was... I appreciate your thoughtful response
R

Yeah, I really enjoyed that. All sounds fine to my ears Randy.
 
Listening to Sonata in D Minor too... You've got a good thing going on here, for sure

Another Song from my daughter and I if you are interested... thanks for listening
https://soundcloud.com/r-calligan/longing