Hi John.  Thanks for listening and especially for commenting.  Kenny's comments (below) also suggest bringing the vocals down a bit.  So, since both of you are suggesting that, I will cut them back a bit and hopefully that will give the drums a bit of a chance to come through more.  Thanks again.
 
Hey Kenny.  Thanks for listening.  I appreciate your comments very much.  I will soften up the vocals as you and John suggest and hopefully, that will give the instrumentation a better chance to come through.  Thanks again for listening and commenting.

You defo got that raw sound that's you were trying for. I love this!

Thank you Scotty!  I am glad that you liked it!

This is some good Freddy. What a solid sound you have on this one. It seems like everytime I listen to one of your tunes your guitar playing, singing and mixing abilities has improved. This is such a fun song - I think I'll go get me a beer.

i enjoyed this. there's a growly bass-end to this mix which suits the subject matter perfectly. in fact i'd love to hear this covered by Distant Towers as their dark grunge would be even more suited.
lovely clear mix and the singing is excellent

Freddy J
To my delight -- Microsoft provided a new Windows 10 update which promises to fix a "potential" (really - potential?) sound problem.  Well, it is installed and to my surprise the crackling and popping have been reduced (at least as of this posting) a great deal. 
Here is a song which is an update on the goings on of Miss Prissy.  Somewhere on my SoundClick page is the first account of her.  She still is stuck in her bad attitude.  Even the fictitious Freddy J could not change her.  Freddy's frustration finished the relationship.  However, it has been on the grapevine that some kind of relationship is building between Miss Prissy and Slow Moe.  You remember him don't you.  The first account of him is somewhere on the SoundClick page also.
 
In this song I was going for a raunchy, slinky sound.  I wanted it fairly bare bones, raw, and definitely not over produced (as if I had the smarts to do that).  I also used my new EKO Ghost VI on it.  I noticed, after finishing this, that the strings on it caused me to squeak a bit.  I will be changing those.
 
Anyway, even though I was going for a raw sound, I would appreciate any feedback that you might provide.
 
I hope that it gives you a bit of a giggle.  Thanks!
 
HEY, Miss Prissy
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=963481
 

Gotta keep it raw and keep it real man. This is AWESOME!!!!!! It's polished to perfection where the REAL WORLD goes in my opinion, the kinda stuff you can't tweak so to speak. A real recording and a real expression of the tune. 
MIX IS PERFECT!!!!!!!
 
Thanks for sharing!!!! Loved this tune and raw is what I like to hear/MEANING REAL. Good stuff!!!
 
 

Hi Mark:  I'll drink to that.  I appreciate the encouragement buddy.  I really like your new post (song).  You have done some excellent work with that number.
 
Hi Mark (mgh):  Thanks for the listen and kind comments comments are very much appreciated.  I think that your suggestion about Distant Towers is excellent.  I would love for them to cover this number.  They certainly have the talent and expertise.
 
Hey Serious_Noise:  I am really glad that you liked it.  Raw and real is what I was going for on this one.  Thanks for listening and thanks very much for taking the time to comment.
 

Freddy J
Hi Mark:  I'll drink to that.  I appreciate the encouragement buddy.  I really like your new post (song).  You have done some excellent work with that number.
 
Hi Mark (mgh):  Thanks for the listen and kind comments comments are very much appreciated.  I think that your suggestion about Distant Towers is excellent.  I would love for them to cover this number.  They certainly have the talent and expertise.
 
Hey Serious_Noise:  I am really glad that you liked it.  Raw and real is what I was going for on this one.  Thanks for listening and thanks very much for taking the time to comment.
 

You NAILED IT and it was RIGHT ON MY FRIEND!!!! Keep on keepin' on!!!!
 

Thanks again and I really like your recent post!