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2016/05/25 21:47:10
Sixfinger
Glad I stopped in. Sound really good here. (while agreeing with the comments)
2016/05/26 03:15:16
Texmes
Thanks for listening Sixfinger. :-)
 
2016/05/31 14:30:22
stevec
I like it....    It's good a cool vibe, open and dreamy but still solid.   The verb on the vocal seemed a bit heavy at first, but by the end it seemed to fit.  
 
If you have SPlat I'd increase the level of the Mid-High band then sweep it back and forth to see if a specific range gives you a bit more presence without being harsh.  I'd also be tempted to try the PC Tape Sim after the EQ... 
2016/06/01 04:09:06
Texmes
Thanks for listening Steve.
 
Also thanks for your feedback. Havn't really had time to work on and test all the changes sugested yet, but will as soon as I get the chance. 
 
rgd
 
Anders
 
2016/06/01 11:47:53
cwestmont
This is a great tune -- real power and great beat. Kind of like early Cure.  I agree with the comments that the vocals sit a bit too low in the mix in the early part of the tune, but I always struggle with how to do that nicely so I'm not one to talk.  ;-)
 
The falsetto starting around 1:30 is really good, as is the chorus.  You might want to find a way to introduce it earlier, if only a small taste, to lead the listener deeper into the song.  (If I could sing like that, I would sing the whole song in the higher register!)   
2016/06/02 05:29:09
Texmes
Thanks for listening and for your input Cwestmont.
 
I will for sure work more and the vocals.... once I have time... *sigh.. :-)
 
 
2016/06/02 17:09:30
Serious_Noize!
What are you going for? I really like the Sway guitar sounds at times/Tremolo with clean guitar. 1950's American sounding. 
 
I liked hearing this. Although as a listener I wish you would bring up the vocals a whole lot more because it's hard to hear any type of voice. 
 
Thanks for Sharing!!!!!!!
 
2016/06/03 15:55:40
Slugbaby
Damn, I LOVE this track!

Honestly, I wouldn't change the vocals at all.  They sit smoothly and subtly for the first minute, right along with the feel of the track.  And I like how they're solitary, without the falsetto.
The only recommendation I would make would be to redo the overdriven guitar after around 2:30, with a sloppier, more dynamic performance.  It's good as is, but disappears a bit because it's too nice (in my opinion).
Anyway, i'm going to listen to it again right now before I move on to another song.
2016/06/07 02:20:30
Texmes
Thanks alot for listening Slugbaby and for your positive feedback. 
 
I'm honestly not a good guitarplayer, so will have to manually edit the solo. Thats why you find it too "neat" now I guess. But will for sure give it a go, and see if I can make it more dynamic/"sloppy"
 
Also Thanks to Serious Noize. The vox will need some work. I'm planning to slightly up the mid-sections a bit. At least in the start of the song. 
 
Thanks again guys. 
 
 
2016/06/07 14:48:51
bapu
Thanks for sharing. Cymbals seemed a little splashy to me.
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