I like your guitar playing , your song starts off great but like everyone I agree with the mix . Also work on your song structure and a good melody , too much repeating stuff going on throughout the whole song .
Break things up a bit and keep your listeners tuned in , listeners lose interest if the whole song sounds like a merry-go-round .
You have something worth working on , thanks for sharing .

J. S.

Playing sounds fine here but as has been noted by several other above the mix needs some serious attention in the bottom end and general tweaking to bring it together good advice above regarding some surgical EQ'ing..
Thanks for sharing.

BUMP cuz Updated.. 

This sounds like a much improved mix, I am not hearing the Bass problem I was.
 
Nice job.

enjoyed the listen.....still needs more mixing work IMHO....overall has an etched feeling (kinda not in a good way)
 
cool song tho

I like it - you've got some skill my friend.

Excellent groove.  My novice ears say that you need to work on the clarity of the mix.  If there is any heavy reverb in there get it out and really work towards placing each instrument in its appropriate frequency range.  (Easier said than done)