Hi everyone been busy working on my Red Rooster song , took your advice with the reverb issue and removed most of that in the music and then worked on some lyrics for the music , last time I added vocals was four years ago and same with lyrics so I might be a somewhat rusty but here it is anyway.
Please let me know if you hear any type of crackle sound going on , I downloaded this free MP3 converter .
http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=13378924&q=hi

Made some new changes , redid my vocals , remixed everything
This is it no more changes , hope you like it now

Sounds like a pretty good Mix James. Although it sounded to me like your vocals started out off timing right from the start, you rushed it at the start although the rest sounded better fitting the tune. I wouldn't change the vocals except for the start of the song, the first line, it was really obviously off timing for a start. 
 
It's a little out there and kinda dirty, but then again, it is about a Rooster. 
 
I enjoyed hearing this one James, had some laughs along the way, it's a Character song who happens to be known as "The Red Rooster". Very creative and well done except for the starting lyrics timing, just the start the rest sounded fine. 
 
As for the mix, I think the vocals might be lowered just a slight bit and raise the volume of the overall mix and add a little bit more reverb on the vocals. But that's just me and the way I hear it, although my hearing isn't what it used to be and I've been dealing with allergies so take my opinion on the mix as a grain of salt, I am no mix master. 
 
Enjoyed hearing this one James!!! Thanks for sharing!!! Also : It was nice to hear a song of yours with Vocals on it for a change, it really changes the perspective of what you are going for with your music when it's finished and has words and vocals. 
 
 

Thanks Bobby for your comments on my vocal song , yea like I had mentioned before it's been four years or so singing and writing lyrics so I'm rusty at it but hey I gave it my best with this one that was more of a joke song for my long time best friend Steve .
He lived in Las Vegas for many years and told me about this place called the Red Rooster so after giving me the details I started calling him the Red Rooster everytime I called him . LOL
Then I got this ideal in my head to create a song for him called " Red Rooster " .
This is the first song I have created that has sexual overtones and Lyrics but there's really nothing too dirty in the lyrics .
Yes it's not a Christian song , the devil might be thanking me for this tune ! LOL
Dam let's hear it for James , this one is for me ! LOL

Thanks again for the listen and comments Bobby !
LOL maybe next song I will do a Christian song and really blow every ones minds !

J.S.
Thanks Bobby for your comments on my vocal song , yea like I had mentioned before it's been four years or so singing and writing lyrics so I'm rusty at it but hey I gave it my best with this one that was more of a joke song for my long time best friend Steve .
He lived in Las Vegas for many years and told me about this place called the Red Rooster so after giving me the details I started calling him the Red Rooster everytime I called him . LOL
Then I got this ideal in my head to create a song for him called " Red Rooster " .
This is the first song I have created that has sexual overtones and Lyrics but there's really nothing too dirty in the lyrics .
Yes it's not a Christian song , the devil might be thanking me for this tune ! LOL
Dam let's hear it for James , this one is for me ! LOL

Thanks again for the listen and comments Bobby !
LOL maybe next song I will do a Christian song and really blow every ones minds !

There is nothing wrong with the content of your song James, it's a risky type of content word wise type of song. I don't get why nobody isn't listening or replying, that just ain't right. You poured your heart out, funny song or not and followed everyone's advice on what they thought you should do listening to this new version.
 
It's a story song with a character called "THE RED ROOSTER" character singing he is the king of hooking up with girls. 
 
I enjoyed hearing the music a second time to figure out what it was all about. The words were really entertaining. Music was spot on. You should post more songs with words because that's what everyone wants to hear, ya know A SONG.  Although only people over their 40's would get this song as a joke guess. 
 
It does have some sex content in there with the words. But it's in a comical way. Like I said though, Not everyone will get the comical side and the fact that you wrote this for a friend of yours who told you a story and had some fun making a song with words with it. 
 
Either way, This was really great the more I listen and think about what you started with and ended up creating. That's what so many are missing. 
 
That's my full review James, I'm no Mix Master, You know that, and I am your Friend : AT LEAST I HOPE SO: but I wanted to point a few things out others might have missed. 
 
 
Please post all future songs with words & vocals and FINISHED and roll from there........ 
 
Enjoyed hearing this AGAIN with the REMIX..... 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Thanks again Bobby for a second listen and comments on my remix version .
Yea I didn't care for the first uploaded version so I went back in and redid my vocals making those little noticeable errors and tried my best to correct them and smooth things out .
I also raised up the music track slightly , as for reverb on my vocal track I wanted a tab of reverb , tried to keep my vocals slightly on the dry side .
Anyway thanks again for your comments , maybe next month I will create something new with lyrics & vocals .
Something different , this was more or less a joke type song for my friend Steve .

Cheers !
James

While I thought it was funny James, I didn't see it as any kind of "JOKE SONG", I thought it was very well done and enjoyed hearing it. 
 

I find this very strange there's not one person who has commented on my song after I went back in and removed almost all of the reverb and added lyrics and vocals to it .
Ok I get it it might be a bit hard to digest word wise for some of you but hey good or bad it's still a song worth listening to with a few laughs along the way .
For me it was a one of a kind song created and written for my best friend Steve , yea I thought this might be a funny song project to create and I know he will like it and laugh his ass off when he listens to it .
Anyway thanks everyone , you guys are great !

James

Well it looks like you have 395 views and No replies. I guess these bible belt holier than thou church going mofo's just don't wanna reply or give it a listen. 
 
James, if I win the lottery, on my way to Vegas in a Limo I am going to pick you up along the way and we will be blasting this song over the speakers on YOUR way to the red rooster ranch, as for me, I'm going to the BUNNY RANCH just to make a few new real friends who know what being screwed means and well, maybe give a few babe's there a little hug............ Hahahahahahahahaa
 
 

Why didn't the ROOSTER CROSS THE ROAD JAMES? BECAUSE IT WAS NOT A CAKEWALK!!!!!!!!! hahahahahahahaha