Ha ha ha funny Bobby ! LOL

J.S.
I find this very strange there's not one person who has commented on my song after I went back in and removed almost all of the reverb and added lyrics and vocals to it .

Nothing personal, just so many songs posted and so little time to listen...   
 
For me, the vocals sound like part of the song, as though they were written together.  So well done!  Although they're mostly spoken I think they work, though you might need an Explicit Lyrics stamp.          Mix-wise the reverb is still a bit heavy more my tastes, mainly on drums and vocals.    But that's a subjective thing.  

Thanks Stevec for commenting on my song , I played it for my long time friend Steve today and he laugh and said thanks he liked it wanting me to send him a CD copy .
Yea it's a one of a kind song alright , as for the reverb I took most of the reverb out of all my recorded tracks .
Before it was swimming in reverb just like they said so I corrected that by removing half of what was in each recorded track .
Anyway thanks again glad you enjoyed it , I wouldn't go to the Red Rooster barn in Vegas but it was fun creating and singing about it ! LOL

Thanks !
J.S.

sounds like you were having fun making this tune.....maybe too much fun...lol
 
thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the listen , yea had to come up with something funny for my good friend Steve . LOL
Thanks thepogue !
J.S.

J.S.
Thanks for the listen , yea had to come up with something funny for my good friend Steve . LOL
Thanks thepogue !
J.S.

Sounds good James, you should do more songs with Vocals and words. 

You had me smiling on this one, James!

Hi Scotty ! Alittle bit of darkness never hurt anyone , go get-um Red Rooster !! LOL
Hey thanks for the listen , maybe the next one will be called " The Green Lantern " ! LOL
Yea my buddy Steve told me to do a search on that place in Las Vegas , maybe a sequel ! LOL

Cheers !
J.S.

Who is the Rooster James? Name the characters? That would be kinda cool............ 
 
Sorry to put you in such a Pickle of a situation by asking, but I thought I would ask. 
 
While the content of this tune of yours is rather ADULT and out there, I really do like it my friend. It tells a Story and takes the listeners on a journey. 
 
So I must ask, knowing my last line of opinions. Will there be a Part 2 to this story? Or perhaps a book? 
 

You should do an Alternate version of this tune, I mean go 360 on it with completely different words and a different direction. 
 
You've got a good thing going on with this tune, DON'T GIVE UP just because you don't get a lot of replies!!!!!!!