Short intro - I like it, my co-writer hates it. What do u think?

2016/05/28 13:19:58

Maarkr

I like this intro for a song... my collaborator doesn't like it at all! Post if you like it or if u don't like it, or what u don't like about it! Thanks!

http://tinyurl.com/hl6d6t7

2016/05/28 13:26:28

Wookiee

Not much to go on, timing of the guitar sounds a little off and it is perhaps a little like I have heard it before, which is always tricky. I sit on the fence, unless it is pointy, until I hear some more.

2016/05/28 13:32:08

eph221

Ya not enough to go on.

2016/05/28 13:34:24

yorolpal

That's kinda like saying: I've got this book I wrote and I want to start it with "Call me Ishmael" but my writing partner wants to start it with "Call me Gary". What do you guys think?

2016/05/30 19:59:06

bapu

yorolpal
That's kinda like saying: I've got this book I wrote and I want to start it with "Call me Ishmael" but my writing partner wants to start it with "Call me Gary". What do you guys think?

THIS ^^^^^^.

But if it were I'd start with "Some know me as Bapu".

2016/05/31 21:48:37

emeraldsoul

I hear nothing that suggests this could not eventually, with a few timing tweaks, be the intro to a song.

hope that helps!

-Tom

p.s. I also predict you are going to end up with a different collaborator :)

2016/06/01 11:49:45

cwestmont

What Tom said.

2016/06/01 11:52:34

Metaphasic

Singularly it sounds fine. But without the rest of the song, there is little context. I can say this however; this short piece has more soul and energy than any completed song I ever did.

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