I have a huge number of unfinished songs all over my hard drive. Not sure why I find the last 10% to be so hard to do. But here is one I actually finished about 10 years ago:
 
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Disclaimers: I'm not a songwriter, singer, producer, sound, mixing or mastering engineer. I write non-music software during the day so don't expect anything good musically.

What, you don't work in marketing?  :)
 
I liked your song structure. Organ used very tastefully, vocals coming in at slightly unusual times - not predictable - kind of got an early Pink Floyd vibe from the overall arrangement.
 
Very nice! I'd look at your cymbals, something is making them less pristine/clear and more flangey than I'd go for. The rest of your mix seems pretty solid, nice separation of elements.
 
And I can totally relate to having dozens of partially finished songs!
 
 
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks for taking a listen Tom!
 
I'll check what's up with the cymbals. I sent it through LANDR before uploading so maybe they added some "sizzle" or something that made the cymbals a bit flangey since I don't have a lot of processing on it.

The guitar lead that comes in is a little loud but otherwise I really like it. :D

Well at least you were upfront about your efforts.  Works here, very little to crit really, I do wonder if it might be a tad over compressed/limited.   Thanks for sharing and share some more

I dunno, sounds pretty good here.    It does seem to have a Pink Floyd-ish vibe as mentioned above that I think works well.  I like it!   The arrangement really suits the song and the vocals are nicely intelligible.  Loved some of those chord changes too...
 
I can also identify with the half (or less) finished songs thing - I've got more incomplete than complete!   So if this is one of the rarer cases, I think you need to finish more of them.   

Nice one Steve! I would suggest panning the lead guitar out of the way of the vocals, and maybe adding a delay panned opposite side.
 
The rest of this mix is pretty good, everything sits pretty well.
 
I think the flangey cymbals are an artifact of Landr followed by Soundcloud compression.
 
Regards,
Dan

Thanks for all the feedback, very encouraging! I'll try out some of the suggested changes and see how that works.