I certainly hope you have a cd planned? Cool songs, lots of imagination, this one is no exception.
Mix-wise maybe your hi-hats are just a bit trebly/splashy, kind of bright in spots? Other than that a really well defined and separated mix.
Vocal is a total strength. Very curious to hear how you got your "Just one foot in front of the other" chorus recorded, I imagine . . . it's really . . . real? Or is there a "gospel in the Box" vsti I missed? :)
cheers,
-Tom