What a beautifully weird song.  The verse (?) is great and immediately got my attention, but the slow down part really lost me.  I would need a stronger melody to make me listen again and the percussion was a bit..irrelevant almost.   But very creative and inventive, and most of all, inspiring. 

Thank you, Voda La Void, for the encouragement and for those nice comments! I will certainly take note of the points you mentioned and keep them in mind. It is much appreciated :)
 
Kenny (kennywtelejazz), you are such a kind and considerate soul, and I find myself looking forward anxiously (and a little nervously) to your commentary. It amazes me how you can be so giving of your time and wisdom to a total stranger. I read your comments very carefully and take your views and advice to heart - it's so gently and kindly given.
 
Thank you for the tremendous help you are and for the hope you are giving me.
LJ

Love the tempo changes.
 
I grinned all the way through this song
 
Nice live feel to this too. Kept me hooked to the end...

Thanks, syncotron. I'm grinning just from knowing the song made you grin
LJ