I love the funky beat/bass. What really stood out to me was those cool jazz chords and that bass vibe.

Just had a listen...   Sounds good here.    Did you change the vocal in the mix?   I do hear some effect but as it is I liked it.    Oh, and yeah, it sounds like a Steely Dan influence is all over those changes + melody.   Not easy to pull off this well IMO, but Ol Pal can do it.   
 

Yup...I changed several things from the initial mix...not the least of which was the vocal. Thanks for the critical listen!

Very nice, great intelligent lyrics and groovy.
The hi-hat is maybe i a tad hissy, in my ears.
Very nice, you are very musical.

Whoa, did this one slide off of the 1st page? How'd that happen?
 
:)
 
 

yorolpal
Another new ditty up on my soundcloud thingy.
 
Dreaming of You
 
Sleep tight...don't let the bedbugs bite.
 

 

Hi Yoropol, 
Great song, loved the groove. I think the changes you made worked well it all sounds good to my ears. Listening to your new song now "Nobody breaks My Heart" just as good if not better, you got something going on. I enjoy your work.

Nice groove Olpal grabbed the furry ears and instructed the furry paws to start tapping, enjoyed the whole thing, which I think is mix 2, there was one place where I felt the vocals got a little lost but I was enjoying the bass and drums I did not spot the time.