Im not sure i succeded, but im still proud of it.
It would be interesting to know how my lyrics sound for someone living in the US or UK.
Is it very obvious that my native language isnt english?
 
Thanks for listening
https://soundcloud.com/kl...mer-days-summer-nights

Great stuff all the way! Mix was good on my system.

kakku
Great stuff all the way! Mix was good on my system.

Thank you very much! :)

Very nice. Mix is good. Your voice has a Jon Anderson quality to it.
 
My only (personal and minor) thought is that the vocals could be EQ'd just a tad to cut through the mix a little more.

bapu
Very nice. Mix is good. Your voice has a Jon Anderson quality to it.
 
My only (personal and minor) thought is that the vocals could be EQ'd just a tad to cut through the mix a little more.

Thank you very much for your kind words and feedback. Actually im not the singer, it's a friend called Alvin River.
Im no expert in mixing vocals, so i think i have done what i can at this point.
But im always learning. Thanks.

Nice song, and the mix is pretty good. I hear more Freddie Mercury than Jon Anderson, but still, your friend can sing quite well. I think that Ed's comment is correct, something is missing from the sound of the vocal to give it some polish and really let it be the center of the song.
 
Finally, I'd suggest giving the vocal some breathing space because, except for your solo section, the vocal is pretty much nonstop.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

dcumpian
Nice song, and the mix is pretty good. I hear more Freddie Mercury than Jon Anderson, but still, your friend can sing quite well. I think that Ed's comment is correct, something is missing from the sound of the vocal to give it some polish and really let it be the center of the song.
 
Finally, I'd suggest giving the vocal some breathing space because, except for your solo section, the vocal is pretty much nonstop.
 
Regards,
Dan

Thanks for listening and the valuable feedback!
The nonstop style, that is a personal style i have.
But i will deffinately look att the vocals a bit more.
But please note, im just an amateur.
 

I'm still an amateur after being involved in about 100 mixes since 2008.

bapu
I'm still immature after being involved in about 100 mixes since 2008.

Scandalized!!!
 
 
 
 
 
(sorry, I couldn't help it....)

kloon
Im not sure i succeded, but im still proud of it.
It would be interesting to know how my lyrics sound for someone living in the US or UK.
Is it very obvious that my native language isnt english?
 
Thanks for listening

It's works , nice vocals