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  • I tried to make a summer hit! (p.3)
2016/04/23 13:20:00
kloon
yorolpal
Nice tune and synth production. But great vocals. Dead on pure pop sound.



Thank you very much for your kind words!
2016/04/26 18:37:35
Lynn
You have a unique voice, and it sounds like you know how to get a lot from it.  This song sounds very contemporary and should find a big audience.  I think it's good as is.
2016/04/26 19:03:51
eph221
Mark is right, dead ringer for Air Supply, the guys doing the TIME LIFE gig.  But in my mind you LOOK like Jon Anderson, much more pleasant.
2016/04/26 23:11:31
emeraldsoul
Don't forget this guy's voice:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rrJky8YuTr4
 
At :13, you go from cheerful beach seagull to LOUD lead synth - maybe fade that synth line in so it doesn't seem like it squashed the seagull in mid-flight.
 
nice summer hit, I liked it! 
 
cheers,
-Tom
2016/04/26 23:54:18
kloon
Thanks guys for listening, feedback and your very kind words!
 
I wrote and arranged the song. But it's a friend doing the actual singing.
I will be sure to tell him that you like his vocals. :)
 
2016/04/28 08:14:37
stevec
I agree with the comments above - good pop song!  Pleasant and catchy melody that's well sung, and the instrumentation supports it nicely.   But I do think it could "breathe" a little more...   I'd probably bring the sustained pads in and out (completely or just in volume) and/or use a few different pad sounds and exchange them as the song goes on.       Summer's on its way.... 
 
2016/04/28 09:07:52
kloon
Thank you very much SteveC for your feedback & kind words!
They bring warmth on cold day like today (in Sweden). :)
2016/04/28 09:13:07
Slugbaby
Just the type of song i was in the mood for this morning!  Good job, it's a very slick production.
 
As for the lyrics, I didn't notice anything un-English.  But then again, I had a Quebecois friend who often had grammar issues with English songs and it was part of the charm.
2016/04/28 10:39:33
kloon
Slugbaby
Just the type of song i was in the mood for this morning!  Good job, it's a very slick production.
 
As for the lyrics, I didn't notice anything un-English.  But then again, I had a Quebecois friend who often had grammar issues with English songs and it was part of the charm.




Thank you very much, and thanks for commenting on the lyrics. :)
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