I like it too, for the singing, the guitar tones, the mix being pretty clean, just a nice happy song, and I can relate to the concept, except how about 1 week or . . .
Rhythmically, though, your drums are going for a swing feel while the other elements are seeming to play more in a straight four - it can be done, but it's tricky and I hear some spots where I'm not sure it works. I'd say the last half of the song is much tighter and seems to work well.
In the first half, you might look at where your bass g and your kick drum are hitting, I think they miss each other on a few downbeats. Or am I hearing problems that aren't there?
I really liked the outtro and the big chorusy thing, really cool and very professional sounding.
cheers,
-Tom