Love this. The 'off' note is as creepy as a creepy thing in creepytown. Very nice.

Wouldn't be out of place in Wes Craven horror movie with that repeating riff with the discord note at the end of each phrase. Well conceived idea and nice clear mix.

Thanks again everyone. I really appreciate the comments. Im looking forward to posting more tracks like this.

If you post 'em, we'll listen.   
 
Yeah, that was eerily cool.   Pleasant tones combined with that out-of-scale note makes it nicely unique!
 

Thanks Steve, I really appreciate this community.  I post in numerous other forums and am lucky to get 1 response.  You guys give me critiques, praise..........I really appreciate it. 

I thought the percussion didn't gel well with the rest of the track.   Those Damage loops really fill out the spectrum, and I feel you need to carve some space out for your other sounds, the percussion drowned it out in places, and didn't really "sit" well for me.  It also ended abruptly (the Damage).  Maybe a subtler loop, lower in the mix, would work better.
What were the sounds from Bravo (I've been looking at getting that for a while)?

ULTRABRA
I thought the percussion didn't gel well with the rest of the track.   Those Damage loops really fill out the spectrum, and I feel you need to carve some space out for your other sounds, the percussion drowned it out in places, and didn't really "sit" well for me.  It also ended abruptly (the Damage).  Maybe a subtler loop, lower in the mix, would work better.
What were the sounds from Bravo (I've been looking at getting that for a while)?

Thank you for the comment, the sound from the Bravo library was called Sad Piano.  I actually intended the Damage Loop to gradually get louder throughout the piece.  The musicians I wrote this for asked for that.  Thanks again Ultra.