The track has been very well recorded including the vocals, it holds together nicely. Great use of sound effects it keeps the track driving forward.

Landr aside that is a really good song!!  I mean really good.  I'm not into EDM, but that song is totally infectious.  You need to be making money with that thing.  Plus, vour voice works perfectly with the material.
 
Best of luck with your music.

Really nice work.. Very commercial sounding, great quality.

Very cool - production and mix is excellent - some nice subtle touches.

Love it, very creative. I would like the vocal louder however, more up front. I think as is the bass is too loud and steals the attention (at least mine, anyway) from the vocal, which is pretty killer.
 
I'd say keep the bass as is (very commercial) but can you boost the vocal elements just a bit?
 
cheers,
-Tom

emeraldsoul
Love it, very creative. I would like the vocal louder however, more up front. I think as is the bass is too loud and steals the attention (at least mine, anyway) from the vocal, which is pretty killer.
 
I'd say keep the bass as is (very commercial) but can you boost the vocal elements just a bit?
 
cheers,
-Tom

I must either have really super lousy speakers or something, because on another thread people said the the vocals were good in the mix when they were obviously way to loud to me.  And contrarily, his voice in this mix sounds perfect.  Interesting.  Also, I've noticed that in EDM the voices are often treated like one of the instruments, especially if they're treated electronically, rather than as upfront like they are in rock.  At least that's how I tend to hear EDM.

Well....I'm certainly no expert in this genre.....
 
The song has a good drive to it which is required for the style and genre.... bass and kick have it going on.  With those 2, you can pack a dance floor.  I actually listened to the entire song, which is also a testament to the fact that it's a good song.
 
I can appreciate the graphs and statistics on songs..... but what really matters is how the listeners perceive the music.... can they dance to it?   In this case I'd say you succeeded.  All the other stuff..... ear candy as someone else said.
 
I might have to have a listen later on my cans to hear it better represented.
 
Nicely done.

Not to embarrass the OP but he's kind of eye candy too.  er, how's the teeth mate?  I guess it don't matter;  David Bowie had kind of a vampire thing goin on with his teeth.  Madonna got a big gap in her front teef.

eph221
Not to embarrass the OP but he's kind of eye candy too.  er, how's the teeth mate?  I guess it don't matter;  David Bowie had kind of a vampire thing goin on with his teeth.  Madonna got a big gap in her front teef.

My teeth are amazing.
EDIT: My teeth WERE amazing. I'm afraid my profile pic was taken about 12 years ago....ehem!

Guitarhacker
Well....I'm certainly no expert in this genre.....
 
The song has a good drive to it which is required for the style and genre.... bass and kick have it going on.  With those 2, you can pack a dance floor.  I actually listened to the entire song, which is also a testament to the fact that it's a good song.
 
I can appreciate the graphs and statistics on songs..... but what really matters is how the listeners perceive the music.... can they dance to it?   In this case I'd say you succeeded.  All the other stuff..... ear candy as someone else said.
 
I might have to have a listen later on my cans to hear it better represented.
 
Nicely done.

Thanks Guitarhacker - I appreciate you taking the time to listen, despite this not being your 'go to' genre. When it comes to dancing - I'd probably say this one's a little slow for that. It's more (as my friend recently put it) an 'Ibiza chill-out kinda vibe'...which suits me too!