After many years absent from this forum due to the various distractions of life, I finally finished a song. I'd love some constructive criticism regarding the production so I can up my game etc.
 
Thanks again to everyone who provided feedback toward the remastered version. I hope I've addressed everything... please let me know your thoughts!
 
Remastered track is right here:  Alright Tonight
 
Thanks in advance!
 - Paul

What a delightful song!   This one takes me back to some of the early new wave stuff mixed with some of the 1960's bubblegum rock.  Excellent playing, vocals, and you have got a good sound in the mix.  It is panned very wide,  was that intentional?
Nice one!!!

Really cool song well performed Paul - you shouldn't stay away so long....
Mix-wise, it's lacking bottom end

What Daryl said...otherwise, the mix is very clean.
 
Very Tommy James...
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Thank you to all that have listened so far!
 
I will pursue a remix this coming weekend after (hopefully) more feedback comes in. I trimmed some low end in mastering, perhaps I went too far? Also, I'd like to use a little less compression so the db level isn't so HOT, then perhaps the clarity in the original working multi-track version  will come through a little more...

I've found that I only trim below 39hz once I'm at the "mastering" stage. If there's too much bass at that point, I fix the mix. Sounds like you may have removed way above that frequency.
 
Regards,
Dan

I love this kind of pop! Very catchy song with a great hook. I dig the bridge, really nicely done. Agree with comments about the low end, it's kind of subdued. I would have loved to hear more harmonies but that's a taste thing, the ones you have in there are great. Love the tune.

Paul,
 
You have some good advice above regarding the mix.  Agree with all of it.   Very good song and overall performance.   Looking forward to update.
 
Regards

I really liked the playing and the tone on the guitars -- I also liked your panning & mixing choices.  Overall, everything sounds very good to me -- great job.  !!
 
Allan
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Thanks again to everyone who listened and especially those who took the time to comment. I'll be posting a mix redux  in the next couple of days with more low-end presence... perhaps I'll push the vox harmonies a little more as well.
 
 - Paul