Yup...   it works.   
 
Nice fat synth layering and good width in the mix. 
 

Not cheesy! In fact, it's considerably less cheesy than some very successful 80's stuff. This kept me interested all the way through, and that's quite a feat. Now you just need a video of a a brooding twenty-something in a trench coat riding around in a starkly lit Berlin commuter train at 2 AM.

good choice of sounds and mix works. Nice stuff Biodode 

Thanks for the positive feedback. I felt like I had lost a limb not being able to make music for that length of time.