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  • Butter on My Toast by Jesse Q. Screed...with stats... bust my chops PLEASE (p.2)
2016/04/03 13:56:05
eph221
Your voice is cool and the chord changes are good.  Words...I'd rewrite.  And this is why:  your listener has to care about what you're saying.  Nobody cares about butter on toast, even if it's a metaphor for patricarchy. :D
2016/04/03 19:41:49
emeraldsoul
I've previously expressed my appreciation for your utter originality, so I'll just say, very very cool.
 
This mix, I think the drums (snare/kick) are too buried and the bass I was wanting more, too. Put some more butter on the snare and the bass!
 
cheers,
-Tom
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