FWIW...  yes, I think this is a more cohesive version.  The violin solo better ties the "bookends" together, and the other changes did seem to improve the mix.    Good second version!  

That is much smoother transition from the intro into the main.  Nice needs to have a now.

Brilliant mate - if you've got it, flaunt it :)
The violin during the song brings it all together - love it

stevec
FWIW...  yes, I think this is a more cohesive version.  The violin solo better ties the "bookends" together, and the other changes did seem to improve the mix.    Good second version!  

Thanks Steve for listening and share your thoughts again! 

Wookiee
That is much smoother transition from the intro into the main.  Nice needs to have a now.

Thanks Wookiee, I'm glad about the furry !

daryl1968
Brilliant mate - if you've got it, flaunt it :)
The violin during the song brings it all together - love it

Yeah, if it isn't good, put more violin in the song. Thanks a lot!

Love the sound of your tune WOW , great sounding violin .
Very nice , I can listen to music with this type of instrumentation  , arrangement and vocals all day long ...
It puts me in a good mood .
 
I left a comment , apparently I misspelled nice as mice ...sorry I tried to change it  SC wouldn't let me 
 
all the best ,
 
Kenny

Harmonious music, wide, warm and bright. Mix 2, I feel works better. Really nice, thanks for sharing. (and thanks for the tips on my last piece)

Lovely song and nice open mix. Vocals are sweet. I liked the violin playing, although it could use some EQ'ing with some 1k to 2k cuts, as it sounds pretty thin when playing on the E string.

Wow, hadn't heard this one yet. Wonderful, upbeat song. Really like the way your wife's voice fits the mood of the song. Lots of nice touches throughout. This mix is also quite good.
 
Regards,
Dan