Love your stuff.
I like the out-in-front vocals. I might dial the bass down a tad in the mix, and I also wonder, does your piano contain many notes down there where the bass is playing? If so, you might nip a few bass piano notes out of there occassionally, so the bass is a little clearer. Just my .02 pesos. It's really pretty good the way it is.
You went for a instrumental sax solo right after the first verse. At that point, I kind of wanted to hear more lyrics, so I could get into the creepy vibe that was being created - then solo it up.
Original, fairly brilliant, very creative, and kudos for not being a cookie-cutter songwriter.
cheers,
-Tom