Freddy, I like the guitar tones you get, especially at 1:21. I lso liked that it was a straight forward lead, not just a pyrotechnic display of wizardry.
I especially love the lyrics, Sounds like a blind date gone bad? You have a nice matter of fact response to whoever that is.
The mix sounds OK on my headphones, i agree a little about the effect on the vocals.
But I do think this is a good song. Not over played, easy for people to relate too.
Jesse Q. Screed