Ummm. It's extremely listenable. I think your elements coming in and out are great choices. My brain liked figuring out. or trying to figure out, just what everything was. Very fun.
I think you've got the magic glue - is that the "Starship Enterprise Going Through Space Ambient Noise" thing in the background at all times?
However, I started scanning ahead at about four minutes, 'cause I like the whooshing very much but I was hoping for a kick ass drum/bass/funk party to start. That is clearly not your intention here! Sorry for bringing that to the party.
Overall it's very cool and clearly creative! Is your entire album like this or do you mix it up some stylistically? Looking forward to hearing some more.
cheers,
-Tom