Hey Terry,
Man, I was groovin' with the 80s vibe on this from the get-go :) Couple of things stood out for me -- the mix seems to need some widening. For instance, the arpeggio part on the chorus would sound great if it was spread 45% left and right in the mix. Also, some background harmonies would really sound smooth. Like the bridge part and the instrumental section after. Oh, and maybe pump up the drums some in the mix. Like the ending too -- that chord.
Good stuff :)
Allan
====