andy_grahammer
<3 Very nice! Well done! Sounds even good on my crappy notebook speakers ;-)

I'm glad to hear that:)

Crappy little Labtec PC headphones here - sounds good!  Well balanced as mentioned previously. 
 

stevec
Crappy little Labtec PC headphones here - sounds good!  Well balanced as mentioned previously. 
 

Glad to hear that the tune translates good with your Labtec PC headphones.

I didn't read any other comments...
 
The song is well recorded -- was it done at Galen Breen's Gatorhole studio? -- everything is fine arrangement-wise.  But -- the big but here -- is that the lyric is generic and that will be a hindrance in getting a cut.  I'd bet that with a different lyric you might get something going with it.  :)
 
Allan
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ABull
I didn't read any other comments...
 
The song is well recorded -- was it done at Galen Breen's Gatorhole studio? -- everything is fine arrangement-wise.  But -- the big but here -- is that the lyric is generic and that will be a hindrance in getting a cut.  I'd bet that with a different lyric you might get something going with it.  :)
 
Allan
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So far I'm getting interest for placement in TV, Commercials and Film. I really can't complain about that. It's funny about things like lyrics, here in the Minneapolis area, most people like the lyrics better than the music.

Maxwell has a song with the same subject called "Pretty Wings". I think this is lovely, bitter and sweet!