Hey Ken, this is really cool - I love all of the elements in it. your voice is really good, but it's hard to hear it all the time because you've got the instruments all squashed to much (compressed). I'd like to hear everything with a little more dynamics - give everything some breathing room.
great playing, great vox - really nice stuff - I think you'll have something really good here if you tweak the mix some.
feel free to ignore the ol' dog, tho!
great tribute to your BIL!