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2016/02/07 14:36:54
Zargg
Hi. I recorded this old song of mine in memory of my late brother in law, as this was one of his favorite songs.
https://soundcloud.com/za...you-turn-out-the-light
Don't be too hard on me
All the best.
2016/02/07 17:33:12
ABull
Hey - The vocals could be up in the mix on this as there are times when the harmonies are difficult to hear -- at least for me.  I liked the keyboard sound and the way it meshed with the guitar sound.  I would pay some attention to tweaking the eq on certain aspects of the mix to bring more clarity.  An interesting listen for sure :)
 
Allan
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2016/02/07 22:50:07
jude77
I like it!!  You have a very interesting voice, and there are some intriguing things going on vocally.  Very, very creative.  At times it sounds like pop, at times it sounds operatic, and you keep both of those elements in tension very well.
 
Best of luck with your music!!
2016/02/08 07:04:46
Zargg
ABull
Hey - The vocals could be up in the mix on this as there are times when the harmonies are difficult to hear -- at least for me.  I liked the keyboard sound and the way it meshed with the guitar sound.  I would pay some attention to tweaking the eq on certain aspects of the mix to bring more clarity.  An interesting listen for sure :)
 
Allan
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Thanks for your feedback, Allan. Will go back and tweak some more
All the best.
2016/02/08 07:06:29
Zargg
jude77
I like it!!  You have a very interesting voice, and there are some intriguing things going on vocally.  Very, very creative.  At times it sounds like pop, at times it sounds operatic, and you keep both of those elements in tension very well.
 
Best of luck with your music!!


Thanks for your feedback, Jim. Will tweak a little and upload a new version when finished.
All the best.
2016/02/08 09:18:42
daryl1968
Very cool Ken - you have a hell of a vocal range. I agree, the main vocal could come up in the mix.
2016/02/08 11:12:27
Zargg
daryl1968
Very cool Ken - you have a hell of a vocal range. I agree, the main vocal could come up in the mix.


Thanks for your kind words, Darryl. I will tweak a bit, and upload when done.
All the best.
2016/02/08 12:19:16
Beagle
Hey Ken, this is really cool - I love all of the elements in it.  your voice is really good, but it's hard to hear it all the time because you've got the instruments all squashed to much (compressed).  I'd like to hear everything with a little more dynamics - give everything some breathing room.
 
great playing, great vox - really nice stuff - I think you'll have something really good here if you tweak the mix some.
 
feel free to ignore the ol' dog, tho!
 
great tribute to your BIL!
2016/02/08 13:26:56
Zargg
Beagle
Hey Ken, this is really cool - I love all of the elements in it.  your voice is really good, but it's hard to hear it all the time because you've got the instruments all squashed to much (compressed).  I'd like to hear everything with a little more dynamics - give everything some breathing room.
 
great playing, great vox - really nice stuff - I think you'll have something really good here if you tweak the mix some.
 
feel free to ignore the ol' dog, tho!
 
great tribute to your BIL!


Thanks for the positive words, Reece. Will tweak some more, and give more room to the different components.
All the best.



2016/02/08 19:16:10
jude77
I find that I keep coming back to this song.  It's very compelling.  Zarg, can you give me any background on it?  Did you write it?  Is it a cover?
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