Hello how does this track sound?
How's is my singing?
Does the track sounds boring?
Is it well balance?
Thank you
https://soundcloud.com/fi...o/vivir-sinti-cakewalk

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Mix sounds OK to me. Vocal is fine, except for those constant sharp intakes of breath - which may be just part of your style - but they were distracting for me.
 
Musically it's OK but fairly bland, it's stays the same throughout really, you could do a little more to add interest to the arrangement I think, add and subtract things, counter melodies, breakdowns etc.

It sounds very good but could use a little something Møre like James said. Mix was good also. Please don't return the comment favor on my current tune because I hope it Falls to page 2 so I can send another tune. Your singing was very good also. Not boring.

Your voice sounds fine...But a lot depends on what you are looking for. Also, as noted above, you might want to put a volume envelope on the vocal line and spike it down at the sharp breath intakes. The tune is good. Do some experimentation with panning, effects and volume to add more interest if you feel it needs it. I think it might benefit with spreading the instruments out a bit. Right now, everything seems somewhat toward center. Try moving the latin percussion to the edges a bit more.
 
How many guitar parts are there? How are they panned?

There are 3 guitars and are pan left and right

Mix sounds good to me.  Couldn't understand a word you said, but I don't speak Spanish. Just Kidding! The vocals sounded fine to me and the breath sounds didn't bother me personally . The song IMHO could use a chorus with a different chord structure or something along those lines to break it up a little and help keep the listeners attention. Overall though it sounds good.

Vocals sounded good to me.  If they don't to you they can always be retracked.  However, keep in mind that when we record our own vocals we become very vulnerable to our inner criticism.  Just about every singer I've ever worked with struggle with hearing their vocals the 1st, 2nd, 5th time through the recording.  Those who didn't either hid it well or were super cocky.  
 
I agree that the breaths could be at least minimized.  There is actually a very relevant thread Ive been following that might be worth a read. http://forum.cakewalk.com/removing-space-between-vocal-lines-m3361072.aspx#3361564
 
Otherwise, I thought you did good work here!  Thanks for sharing!

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Vocals sounded good to me.  If they don't to you they can always be retracked.  However, keep in mind that when we record our own vocals we become very vulnerable to our inner criticism.  Just about every singer I've ever worked with struggle with hearing their vocals the 1st, 2nd, 5th time through the recording.  Those who didn't either hid it well or were super cocky.  
 
I agree that the breaths could be at least minimized.  There is actually a very relevant thread Ive been following that might be worth a read. http://forum.cakewalk.com/removing-space-between-vocal-lines-m3361072.aspx#3361564
 
Otherwise, I thought you did good work here!  Thanks for sharing!

Thank you very much for the post I'll take a look a see what it says

Trying here to make it good