I agree with the comments above - the overall mix and vocal performance sounds just fine.    A little editing to minimize just the more obvious breaths should help clean things up, and perhaps pan the percussion a bit more just for clarity.     Oh, and it needs an ending.    

I think it's quite nice.
 
You could liven it up by adding backing vocals here and there. I think choir style would work really well. As an example look up Foreigner's "I want to know what love it". At the end, they use a choir and it works very well. I think that's what this song needs as it sounds to have an epic quality to it.

Chorus and harmonies aren't they the same thing?

drma173
Chorus and harmonies aren't they the same thing?

I think not. Check it from wikipedia.

hi drma,
you've done a pretty good job here!  the vocals are high passed pretty heavily, if that's what you want, then OK, but I'd like to hear a little bit more of the lower harmonics on them.  pretty nice balance on vocals and instruments.