Hello, I am soliciting comments on this new piece.  It is called "Snow Day".
 
I would like comments on the mix, the eq, and whatever else sounds wack a doodle.
 
http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=13310695&q=hi
 
I can right now say I don't like the percussive attack on the $50 1971 Hohner Guitar, so if you can tell me how to get rid of that clicky schtick it is good.
 
I will put some vox to it some day, and...
 
Thanks in advance

Love the drums - big, punchy and Bonham approved.
 
I would pan the guitar away from center (opposite the strings?) since it seems to be in a supporting role.  Honestly, the attack really didn't bother me.    I did have a problem hearing the bass clearly throughout though, I guess it needs some compression, select EQing and/or automation.
 

Stevec, thanks for the insightful critique. 
 
Do you think the drums are to JBonham?
 
I agree with the bass to, but I sure do like the way my bass girl plays itespecially ay 2:30. Now I just need to find a place for her to sit better in the mix.
 
I'm not very happy with the recording of the guitar.  I think I can do better.
 
This is a sketch right now, I want to try and focus on it, instead of shotgun music submissions.  I've never been able to focus in, and that makes it hard to sleep.
 
Thanks again
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 
 
 

I like the drums. The bass drum may be a little loud. There seems to be a lot of low energy at times where the bass and bass drum are fighting for space.
 
I love the oddball sound to this. I don't think of snow day though. To me, it has a sinister quality to it. Needs lyrics.
 
Overall, I like it!

coool Jesse - great bed to work with - keep on going

Wow man,
what a nice track. I like it very much. The drums are very cool. I like the sound of the drums, null artificially and nice played. For the accoustic guitar the same. For my taste. Hmmm..... i don't like the strings.