Hey Kenny,
 
Excellent use of emoticons.
 
Glad you kind of liked it. 
 
Not sure when the ending will get fixed, collaborations over the internet, by nature, are difficult.
 
I can't tell you a lot about Sir Robage, except that he lived at the dog with me.  It was an amazing place and I don't think you would understand.
 
Why don't you sing?
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 
 

Musically, I love this tune. Very nice work.
 
The mix seems congested in the low mids. Open up the space for everything and this will be even better!
 
Well done!!!

Yeah, sounds pretty good here - I do like the parts you've added, they give it an entirely different flavor than a typical acoustic guitar + vocal song.     Oh, and I liked the guitar lines you added towards the end.    You may just want to drop the bass track's volume at the very end before it does that little "blrp" thing.