eSoul, funky is right.
I like the way you have the piano kind of walking, and then the busy bass. I really like the snare sound and the hats.
I have to be honest, this does have a bit of Q. factor to it, especially the lyrics and the sparse use of words.
The honesty at 3:35 is great. and then the piano goes a bit dissonant. Definitely some Q factor! I hope your feeling ok. I'm a little worried about you, for whom the bell tolls.
Jesse Q. Screed