Rick O Shay
Reminds me of this pretty cool song from the 80's:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ldQpRMegYc0
 

Thanks for commenting. I tried to listen but did ñot come into a resolution whether my tune resembles the song you gave a link to. I need another opinion to say whether they are too alike. I don't think they are too similar but I am not objective. Are the chords going in similar ways? Melody is key ofc.
Edit:Nice song it is and not too similar with my tune IMO.

Very nice Kakku - upbeat and positive vibes. I would like to hear the drums up a bit in the mix.

Thank you Daryl! The song is my better ones i believe and I will try to fix the drums when I next get a chance. I should put some variation in the drums too. ATM I don't have access to my daw except my secondary one but it is in another city and I am not going there until next week I believe.

I'd also vote for a vocal, even some weird spoken word lyrics, pull some dialogue from an old tv show. Something. It's a very pleasant tune, nice in-your-face parts, but needs a bit more to hold interest for over four minutes.
 
Or it could be my short attention span. Squirrel.
 
cheers,
-Tom

emeraldsoul
I'd also vote for a vocal, even some weird spoken word lyrics, pull some dialogue from an old tv show. Something. It's a very pleasant tune, nice in-your-face parts, but needs a bit more to hold interest for over four minutes.
 
Or it could be my short attention span. Squirrel.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thank you Tom! Vocals would BE nice here I agree but I find my voice unsuitable in any kind of musically oriented stuff and I know only one guy who has a good voice. He likes and sings different kind of material entirely. Nevertheless I will try to introduce vocals in some of my stuff some day, some how.