Been good while sense I've been on here,  but just recently graduated Berklee online and learned some new things. I took a Orchestra, poetry, art, Finale and a Western History course in classical music and learned about music, composers I never heard of but I was hooked and started write some the style my self and wanted to share some my work.  The work was all done for charity Sing me a story for children.
 
https://soundcloud.com/marcus-rose-651535225
 
Happy new years to everyone!
 
Marcus

Hey Marcus, 
 
I listened to all three of the pieces -- the one that tickled my ears the most was "Markarith".That one could be developed into something interesting.  Honestly, the other two pieces...while well-played and presented...need more musical variation.  At least, that's how I hear it.  Thanks for the listen 
 
Allan
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Yes , I liked the same tune ABull commented on .
That one brought me someplace ...
I thought the drums were a tad too loud and I would have like to have heard you phatten up all the other instruments and bring them a little more forward in the mix ..
 
It was a nice listen for sure
 
good job ...I look forward to hearing more from you .
 
Kenny

+2 on Markarith - nice vibe on that one.  Just needs some mix work work as Kenny suggested and also some more ambiance; i.e., room/reverb to bring it all together.