I tried to compose an early morning mood 
played with midi-keyboards, sounds from Garritan Personal Orchestra 4
 
                       Aurora
 
                   

This has some good ideas in it.  Did you ever think of doing a string quartet type of arrangement of it instead of just doubling the parts?  I think that'd be interesting.  Maybe add an oboe part to it or some kind of mid-range horn part that weaves in and out of the arrangement -- not too on top of it.  Just some thoughts on first listen.  It could be developed into something that has more variation and impact.  
 
Allan
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Se kuulosti mukavalta=it sounded nice. It could BE still developed further like Allan said.

Very beautiful piece you have here Makke. I also agree with using of strings and even a flute melody.....just thoughts that came to mind when listening. Well done on the composition.

As noted good starting point, perhaps a little additional counterpoint would bring something more to the party.
 
Thanks for sharing.

ABull, kakku, Mesh, Wookie
Thanks for the listening and comments. I apressiated your tips. Maybe on the next tune I do more variations.

 

Very pretty tune. Agree with the above, some movement around the melody with a counterpoint would bring this alive.

I agree with James - very pretty - you have captured the morning mood well.

Yes, it's beautiful as it is but maybe a piano in there, just a few spots maybe. Contrast could be a neat add.
The very end had a little audio burp or something, just FYI.
 
nice tune!
 
-Tom
 

jamesg1213, daryl1968, emeraldsoul
 
 
Thanks for the listening and your comments