Venus & Mr.Oister, thank you for your time
 
Cian

Hi Cian, I did hear the first version but didn't get around to leaving a comment. I do think the changes you've made have helped create a better version. The song has a great feel and the lyrics and vocal delivery really suits. My only comment would be to take some of the instrumentation, or even the drums, a little further back so the vocals stand out more. But then I always say that.
My better half was listening too and we both were bopping along, that's a great sign. Well done.

Rebel,
 
Bopping along is a term I love to hera, that usually mean the groove really clicks which is so important. I will definitely look into that cos I need the vocal to be heard at all times
 
Thanks
 
Cian

Cian - fantastic - you have a great talent.

Mark, Thanks.
 
This is an old post but tweaked it up further, for those that havent listened at all, I would still appreciate serious feedback.
 
https://soundcloud.com/ci...rn/happy-pills/s-p2dpk
 
Cian