Wow, excellent track. Love the production of this. Sounds choices are perfect for the melodies, and that transition at 0:56 made me laugh out loud, it was so good. Cool breakdown as well, you really thought this through.

Very Cool mix.  Love the use of the ambient pads ....  With all those frequencies happening, the bass gets a little washed out. It's there in strength so not sure how to firm it up? Perhaps a little less reverb would help? Not a biggie, though!  

Nice instrumental music. I liked of the melody lines, orchestration and arrangement.
Pleasant ambience and sounds

This is very pleasant with a lot of texture and lovely, ambient sounds.  Overall, I felt that I could predict most of the changes, but this style of music is kinda that way.  I'd like to hear this style of music done with a chord progression other than minor6th-5th-4th repeated over and over.  However, I'm guilty of using that progression over and over myself.  It may be that I'm out of sync on this, so take it with a grain of salt.

It's a fair comment Lynn and apart from one section that has an 8 bar chord progression the tune is really built on those three chords. I think we as musicians can all be guilty of reaching for the tried and tested comfort blanket without realising it.
 
I am hoping to dust off my old music theory books this year and get my head back into classical harmony once I get this exam for work out of the way

Sounds pretty good here - clear and punchy mix.   The lead tone translates well IMO, I also like the arps coming in and out.   That little "clickety" rise that leads into the next section a few times is really cool - nice touch.