Craig,
Thank you so much for listening so thoroughly and providing all of this great feedback!
I do believe you are on to some good ideas. Vocals are a new thing to me and I have been wanting to "fill in" a lot of spaces with vocal flourishes but still a little stumped. I've got a few other clips from Grace that I'll play with and move around. Lots of opportunities with toys such as Eventide.
Oh, the singer is Grace Geibler (
https://gracemusiclive.com/music). Hard to believe but Grace just turned 15. :) She is the singer in my son's band, and they were so good they just back from playing a blues festival in Memphis. It's sort of an "all star" music program and now that my son aged out of the program he's not in the band. But Grace is pursuing him to play drums for her original stuff and I really hope he does it; she is amazing. She is also super nice and humble and just a great kid. For now at least, I think I can get her to come over and record just about anything, so plan on hearing her again! Someday I will probably lose that privilege. I was croaking out my horrible vocals and I then was like "wait a minute, I know the most talented female singer in town..." It was a good moment. :)
So glad you caught the Pink Floyd reference (my favorite band)! I went for the stark contrast of breaking it down to just his voice, but here get what you're saying and I'll experiment with some background/ambient noise. If it works, awesome, if not, I'm sure it'll spark some other idea so thanks!
The vocoder is a place holder - as you can tell! I can't believe how challenging it is to do a good vocoder. I'd like to do something like Daft Punk but I'm far far far away. I may have to go into a different direction. That little vocal line but be good elsewhere.
Not sure what you mean by "extend her last syllable into the next section" and would love to get clarity on that.
It's ironic that your feeling is something missing. I feel it too, but the irony is I've spent the last week removing bits and pieces to make it less cluttered. I think your right it needs more of Grace, and I may have her back to do some flourishes...
Thanks again Craig - you made my night when I saw this last night but didn't have time to properly respond.