I'll have to go with Tom on this one - it's sort of like Primus fronted by Young MC.      Bizarrely unique as always.    Mix-wise the organ riff was a bit out front, but otherwise I think works for what it is.   Speaking of which... what was that ending??   
 

stevec
I'll have to go with Tom on this one - it's sort of like Primus fronted by Young MC.      Bizarrely unique as always.    Mix-wise the organ riff was a bit out front, but otherwise I think works for what it is.   Speaking of which... what was that ending??   
 

Hello Steve, I must admit that I don't even know who Primus is.  I think I have heard of Young MC but will have to check out some of those guys.
 
I never thought I was doing anything "Bizarrely unique," but I'm not put off by that at all.  If the shoe fits.
 
The organ was actually a guitar riff that I morphed in loop construction.  The ending was not necessarily meant to be that way, but sometimes my automation on mix down doesn't translate well.
 
Thanks for listening.  I take everything you have all said as fodder for the grist mill.
 
Jesse Q. Screed

Hello, sorry to be so up front, but I just listened to Primus.  I see what you mean.  I don't want to sound like them.  I want to sound like me.  However, I understand that the word "hamburger" symbolizes much more than (insert the name of that old farmer who had a dog, and a cow...)
 
Jesse Q. Screed
 

Very creative Jesse! I'd like a peek inside your head...
 
Mix sounds very good, much improved over others I've heard from you. And...bring up the vox...
 
Regards,
Dan