Sorry for posting again but I felt a need again to post. It is done with Sonar x1. Found it from the depths of my desktop computer.
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https://m.soundcloud.com/madrigal7/tuned-up

Hey Antti...I do try and keep my promises...the mix is surprisingly good...I'm just using laptop speakers...and if the mix comes through well on these speakers...it tends to mean mix is good.
 
All the sounds are there, for this type of genre...I'm not sure if your playing the keyboards yourself or sequencing them, my only suggestion would be think outside the box.  It sounds a bit generic, if you can make a mix sound good and you know how to paint the genre correctly...then you should be able to find the next gear and add a WOW factor.
 
I will listen to the others tomorrow.
 
Peace Ben

BenMMusTech
Hey Antti...I do try and keep my promises...the mix is surprisingly good...I'm just using laptop speakers...and if the mix comes through well on these speakers...it tends to mean mix is good.
 
All the sounds are there, for this type of genre...I'm not sure if your playing the keyboards yourself or sequencing them, my only suggestion would be think outside the box.  It sounds a bit generic, if you can make a mix sound good and you know how to paint the genre correctly...then you should be able to find the next gear and add a WOW factor.
 
I will listen to the others tomorrow.
 
Peace Ben

Thank you, Ben for listening and even giving a sharp analysis on my tune. I must admit it was playing but I tend to correct my mistakes too 'well' meaning there is not much feel in the notes if that is what you mean when talking about the wow factor. Thanks again.

kakku

BenMMusTech
Hey Antti...I do try and keep my promises...the mix is surprisingly good...I'm just using laptop speakers...and if the mix comes through well on these speakers...it tends to mean mix is good.
 
All the sounds are there, for this type of genre...I'm not sure if your playing the keyboards yourself or sequencing them, my only suggestion would be think outside the box.  It sounds a bit generic, if you can make a mix sound good and you know how to paint the genre correctly...then you should be able to find the next gear and add a WOW factor.
 
I will listen to the others tomorrow.
 
Peace Ben

Thank you, Ben for listening and even giving a sharp analysis on my tune. I must admit it was playing but I tend to correct my mistakes too 'well' meaning there is not much feel in the notes if that is what you mean when talking about the wow factor. Thanks again.

No the wow factor is doing the unexpected.  Thats the wow factor.
 
:) Ben

Yeah, the mix sounds very good here as well.  I think you've got it down! Everything sounds nice and clear.
Cool tune.
 
 

BenMMusTech

kakku

BenMMusTech
Hey Antti...I do try and keep my promises...the mix is surprisingly good...I'm just using laptop speakers...and if the mix comes through well on these speakers...it tends to mean mix is good.

All the sounds are there, for this type of genre...I'm not sure if your playing the keyboards yourself or sequencing them, my only suggestion would be think outside the box.  It sounds a bit generic, if you can make a mix sound good and you know how to paint the genre correctly...then you should be able to find the next gear and add a WOW factor.

I will listen to the others tomorrow.

Peace Ben

Thank you, Ben for listening and even giving a sharp analysis on my tune. I must admit it was playing but I tend to correct my mistakes too 'well' meaning there is not much feel in the notes if that is what you mean when talking about the wow factor. Thanks again.

No the wow factor is doing the unexpected.  Thats the wow factor.
 
:) Ben

Ok. I learned something again. Thanks.

Tap
Yeah, the mix sounds very good here as well.  I think you've got it down! Everything sounds nice and clear.
Cool tune.
 
 

Thank you Tap. Although now happened just what somebody said. 2 tunesfrom the same guy are close together. Sorry people. I did not expect this but I should have.
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