https://youtu.be/2i7dehDFtMs
 
I was going through some songs feeling a bit under the weather then I found this played it a few times and it grew on me so I decided I haven't done it in a while so I put it on You tube in its naked form I am getting brave/r.
 
Thanks for taking the time to listen!

Not a genre I listen to, but it sounds like you were enjoying yourself here, vocals sound good to me.

I haven't heard anything from you with vocals, so thanks for the share! You might push the vocals out front a bit more, occasionally they sound like German? Are they? I was having trouble understanding the lyrics and got the feeling I was missing out on something! I did catch some of the "turn out the lights" line, but you are probably aiming towards an audience a lot hipper than me.
 
I liked the mix. good balance of elements, and a nice simplicity to your choices. My rasta ear is a little underpracticed, so thanks for the workout!
 
Cheers mon,
-Tom

lool I like the comments Jamesg always good to know that you are around
 
Emeraldsoul thanks for giving it a go love this community...Sorry for late reply!

Interesting tune... Vocals work well in this mix. There is something which is sounding a bit too resonant in this ... perhaps it's the snare drum? maybe it's just my setup. ( other than that seems perfectly fine) Cool stuff.