Hey Beagle,
Honesty is a virtue,
Nobody likes to read a poor review. But I don't think your review is bad at all. Though
I don't agree with what you said I do recognize your right to call them as you see them
Taken as a piece of art, this song is a hard one to wrap your head around. There are a lot of very interesting things in there, and it is a heart felt tune with a message.
It's all good, we all see and hear something different. So when you said that I have "some potential," I take that as an honest review too, because I do, but I'm different, and I don't fit any description, so for most of my life people never even said I had anything but a bad attitude.
I feel good knowing you had a thoughtful response.
Jesse Q. Screed