kakku- Thanks!
Dan- I took your advice and added a more ethereal under pinning. I changed the intro and outro. I also added a bridge part made of accordion and lyre. Hope this is better!
Wookie- Thank you!
James- Yes it is quite a contrast. Hopefully the changed bridge will make it more seamless.
Mark- Thank you!
Daryl- Now I'm hungry :) Thanks for commenting. I hope that one day I can see England.
FreddyJ- Yes I think this was Larry's idea. He had wanted to have a raft for his pic...like a castaway who found land. He did use a raft on his soundcloud site. I think it's a great Idea but I couldn't find a pic I liked.Thanks!