https://soundcloud.com/aa...tiks/lament-in-d-minor
 
A flawed diamond. I've been trying to fix this for the better part of a year.
 
Ben 

Very nice. Eccentric even I would say, but I might BE wrong. I cannot make the keyboard of my phone to play nice so it does strange quirks like BE to BE written with big letters.

Thanks Anntti...yes all my work is eccentric...it's who I am!
 
Ben

I would say this is a huge improvement over the previous works you did. And when I said eccentric I meant that in a good way because we need more variety in the music field. Your work may be a bit flawed (I didn"t hear flaws) but it still is a gem.
Edit:
Actually I think everybody's songs are a bit flawed.

It sounded something like a layed back rock opera with out the soprano. Lots of originality here. I'm not used to hearing people in the background talking Australian :)
The thing I picked up on most was the "you break my heart" with that catchy guitar thing happening in the background..it had a hook to it.
Thanks for sharing!

Starise
It sounded something like a layed back rock opera with out the soprano. Lots of originality here. I'm not used to hearing people in the background talking Australian :)
The thing I picked up on most was the "you break my heart" with that catchy guitar thing happening in the background..it had a hook to it.
Thanks for sharing!

Thanks Tim, soprano...great that means I'm not being a wanka when I say I have about 4 octaves in the tank...probably 5.  The Australian accent is actually a sample I took on a train using the Iphone Rode Mic for my Honours project.  I'm so sorry I'm not more active on this forum...my aspergers makes it very difficult to enjoy anything these days.  I get into routines...anyway.
 
Cheers Ben

I expected nothing less than this from you Ben.