Hello Folks,
 
Have a listen to my new chart topper!
 
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=13258483&q=hi
 
For those of you who observe Thanksgiving, I hope you have a great holiday.  For those of you who do not observe Thanksgiving, I hope all your wishes come true.
 
Jesse

Hey Jesse, welcome to the forum.
This is a bit of a different song and I do indeed like it.  The beginning is very creative and I am a sucker for rhythm oriented songs.  The guitar accent notes, IMHO, really create a nice edge to this song.  The style reminds me a bit of the British group Slaves (the Slaves group with Vincent and Holman not the other one with the same name).
 
Nice one!!!

Very interesting and different from what I've heard lately around here. But, where's the bass?
 
Also, everything sounds like it is panned right down the middle. Try spreading things out a bit.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

I really like this Jesse. Sounds great (in it's lo-fi production) and it keeps your attention throughout. Good stuff

Hey, I never thought this many people would comment!
 
Mr. Fizzy Pickle, you know me better than anyone else.  LoFi be I, it's the swamp from my Pa, he was a country boy, he grew up running the creeks and sloughs of his boyhood haunt's.  Subtly, he infused that into me, sometimes with the switchin stick, and sometimes with a hand up. You can take the boy out of the LoFi, but you can't take the LoFi out of the boy.
 
Freddy, gal darn, I wish the best for you.
 
To that other cat, Mr. Martin?  You is so right.  I'm going to go and find that bass, and widen the whole darn thing.  You see, I heard your stuff,and read all you suggestions, and I respect what you offer.
 
Be back soon.
 
Right now I'm working on a song about hot buttered toast.
 
Jesse

really cool groove and cadence with the vocals. Lo-fi sounding production but still a very enjoyable piece in my book. 

Hey, Jesse,
 
Very cool and interesting piece of experimental alternative rock, buddy!
 
I like how the intro with the clean guitar moves into the grungy guitar verse and synth stuff, it's really got a tight, driving groove to it.
 
I also checked out "Mobius Strip of Love" and "Sneak Out Tonight", pretty cool stuff with lots of interesting elements woven throughout, and a very unique vibe.  Love the opening synth in "Sneak Out Tonight".
 
Your style is kind of like a Garage Band/Alternative mash up meets Electronica fusion, similar to some of what Jack White has been experimenting with lately.
 
Good stuff, my friend, keep 'em coming!
 
Have a good one, Jesse!
Bob

Well my lord, I am so excited to know that someone has listened to what I make.
 
I know what I do is different than what is normally posted on this site, but I don't know where else to go. My music mimics my real life. I'm one of those guys that folks aren't so sure about when they meet me. For those with an open mind, they find out that I'm not so bad; for those who live in the box, there is nothing I will ever do to have them listen closely.
 
I have never had a music lesson, or been learned in the recording arts, so what you hear is what you get.  I just like to let myself go. Best thing is,  ninety-eight percent of what I do is done with stock sonar stuff.  
 
I only wish I had enough time to listen to everyone's songs, there is so much talent around here, but my JAY OH BEE gets in the way, and I get tired, and I pass out at my keyboard before I can say what I truly think.
 
To Ohgrant, I am going to search for some of your creations.  I want to get to know you better.
 
Mr. Bob, guys like you have a good heart.  It takes a real man to take the time to share their thoughts, and you are a real man, and a real musician.
 
I'm still working on my buttered toast song.  I'll post it when I'm done.  I have remixed this one, but not sure if anyone wants to hear it again. I did however, want to acknowledge those of you who shared your response.
 
Peace
 
Jesse
 
 

Hi Jesse, I'm getting used to your style now, and I like it. Love the drums and dirty guitar on this. Those atonal runs matched with the vocal are really creative. Who would say your influences were? Jacki White has been mentioned, and Eels certainly comes to mind..Beck maybe?

I'd say vocals up a hair, and yes please get a bass guitar in there.
 
If you need a band name, may I suggest Professor Quirk?
 
What you are doing defines the intersection of originality, innovation, and DIY. Bravo!
 
cheers,
-Tom