I'm getting a David Bowie vibe over here. Unplugged David Bowie. Yet original. Like it. Maybe Harry Nilsson, too.
Certainly is your own lane, bravo!
I'd be tempted to thicken up the vocal in spots. Sometimes I use something like Microshift by Sound Toys for this purpose, but fair warning, only a little dab'll do ya.
Can't wait for the song about how she squeezes the orange juice!
cheers,
-Tom