Bathyscaphe

2015/10/11 16:27:10

RussjWhite

Hi Guys,It's been awhile since I've written anything. Work load and life has kept me away from music. Yesterday I got out my guitar and wrote this piece. I don't think its finished yet, and I haven't done too much on the mixing side of things either. I just wanted to share with you good people and would ask for feedback.
Nice to be back here and writing again :)https://soundcloud.com/russ-white/bathyscaphe

Newer version.....
https://soundcloud.com/russ-white/bathysphere2

2015/10/12 03:51:45

kevinwal

I really enjoyed this song, and I especially liked the way you approached the ending. It's a sweet, sad little tune that deserves to be finished. The sound is wonderful as well, and the mix sounds fine. More, please. :)

2015/10/12 04:29:20

paul b

really nice mood in this tune. this could go well in a movie with the right scene. good job so far:-)

2015/10/12 09:12:30

dcumpian

Nice one Gus. I thought that the cello phrase endings cutoff too abruptly in spots early on. I'd play the notes a little longer and fade them.

Regards,
Dan

2015/10/12 13:31:40

Wookiee

This has lots of potential just needs a few hours work

and you know what I mean by that, it is all there just some polish to finish it. Thanks for sharing.

2015/10/13 03:53:00

synkrotron

Hi Russ,

I liked this a lot... I'd grow it some more... Add another three or four minutes and add some guitar melody...

2015/10/14 15:01:38

stevec

+1 to the above - it ain't done yet!

I like the general melancholy feel. The portamento-ish cello runs were pretty cool and everything seems to fit well together.

2015/10/15 09:47:07

daryl1968

excellent - the playing is beautiful

2015/10/27 03:59:58

RussjWhite

Many many thanks for your words of encouragement. I have had a little more time on it and have added an extra minute or so. I still might keep going seeing where the music takes me. I've put version number 2 up as well. Any feedback would be helpful.

Thanks for listening

2015/10/27 20:14:59

Leizer

Liked it! A little surprised of the style of music when seeing your guitar icon.

Everything is fitting together fine. Maybe a clearer end of the song? The piano pattern is great.

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