I think that song is coming along nicely.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bG0WMquKUM4

I like the song and the mix sounds good hear. However, I agree with Dan on the hand claps. Take some lower middle out of them and take them down 1dB.
Good stuff though mate.

2nd mix is very good. Great song. Go with you instincts on the mix. I wouldn't change it now. There are  ALWAYS tweeks to be made in your mind so decide on the mix YOU like and go with that. Make the decision! The song and you sound great

bayoubill
2nd mix is very good. Great song. Go with you instincts on the mix. I wouldn't change it now. There are  ALWAYS tweeks to be made in your mind so decide on the mix YOU like and go with that. Make the decision! The song and you sound great

Thank you! I don't have a very good track record from following my instincts, lol. I appreciate you taking the time, bill.

Schafe
I think that song is coming along nicely.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bG0WMquKUM4

Thanks, I can't believe what popping out the vocal did for it. I appreciate your comments.

daryl1968
I like the song and the mix sounds good hear. However, I agree with Dan on the hand claps. Take some lower middle out of them and take them down 1dB.
Good stuff though mate.

Thanks for your time, Daryl, definitely going to give that a try. Appreciate it!

I listened to the second mix only. You are done. Great song, great mix!
 
The chorus vocals towards the end sounded a little warbly? wow and fluttery? I assume this is an intended effect . . . but if not, it's like the last minute of the song.
 
Or my internet connection is providing the flutter?
 
super cool, you have excellent separation all the way through.
 
-Tom

emeraldsoul
I listened to the second mix only. You are done. Great song, great mix!
 
The chorus vocals towards the end sounded a little warbly? wow and fluttery? I assume this is an intended effect . . . but if not, it's like the last minute of the song.
 
Or my internet connection is providing the flutter?
 
super cool, you have excellent separation all the way through.
 
-Tom

Thanks for chiming in, Tom! I had to redo almost all the vocals because of an unfortunate bounce that applied a bunch of icky effects in ways that confused the hell out of me to the point that it was easier to start over with them. I guess I missed some.  
 
Thanks for sniffing those out, I guess I ain't done after all!

Kevin,
 
Real good & punchy pop-rock number. Good terse songwriting, MarshalCrenshawesque. Great instramental parts and guitar break. 
 
My only crits (I'm listening on medium-fi mono) are that the snare is too sharp/loud most of the way with the lead vocal relatively subdued (compressed?). This could be a matter of personal taste.
 
Nonetheless, real good stuff.
 
Cheers,
 
Bert
 

Bert Guy
Kevin,
 
Real good & punchy pop-rock number. Good terse songwriting, MarshalCrenshawesque. Great instramental parts and guitar break. 
 
My only crits (I'm listening on medium-fi mono) are that the snare is too sharp/loud most of the way with the lead vocal relatively subdued (compressed?). This could be a matter of personal taste.
 
Nonetheless, real good stuff.
 
Cheers,
 
Bert
 

Bert, thanks for that. I've not tried to listen in mono, I'll have to give that a listen to see what's up with that. It's funny, I juiced the high end on the snare and dropped it a few db's, so it may be that I need to drop the high end a bit on the snare. Thank you for your kind words on the tune itself and for taking the time to check it out!