Hey, thanks for sharing this.
I'm listening to this on headphones.
I like the guitar work and especially at 2:51.
I like that little lick 1:19 too, and the rhythm guitar that falls in behind it .
In my headphones the bass is a little boomy. Otherwise I think the mix is good, a nice airy quality to it.
I like your voice. I think that the vocals are a little hard to hear. Maybe they could be turned up or maybe a little less echo?
the arrangement seems good to me too.
Jesse
Jesse