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2015/11/10 12:26:39
garygml
Hi guys havnt been around for a while.....any input to my new track would be greatly appreciated
 
Cheers Guys
Gary
https://soundcloud.com/ga...ryone-knows-gary-walsh
2015/11/10 13:12:12
Jesse Screed
Hey, thanks for sharing this.
I'm listening to this on headphones.
 
I like the guitar work and especially at 2:51.
 
I like that little lick 1:19 too, and the rhythm guitar that falls in behind it .
 
In my headphones the bass is a little boomy. Otherwise I think the mix is good, a nice airy quality to it.
 I like your voice. I think that the vocals are a little hard to hear.  Maybe they could be turned up or maybe a little less echo?
the arrangement seems good to me too.
 
Jesse
 
 
 
Jesse
2015/11/10 21:12:39
emeraldsoul
Cool, cool, cool.
 
I'd decrease the echo time just a hair on your slapbacky vocals. Love the tone of the vocal, however, really nice delivery. Song is a real nice jam. Guitar work is super clean, hits all the right spots.
 
well done!
-Tom
2015/11/10 21:42:40
ohgrant
Really nicely crafted track great vox and guitar work
2015/11/11 07:31:34
audiomyth
That's one really cool track. What is that wave like sound effect on the guitar in the beginning? It served a nice welcome effect.
 
Regards,
Kane
2015/11/13 06:42:07
Leizer
Good mix, everything sounds very good and clear. Great guitar play, and you have a really good singing voice!
I hear some U2 and REM here.
 
My only crit is the refrain (and sorry if I'm too honest here, the rest of the song is great, so...) :
For me the melody is unnecessary simple. You sing a D on the D-chord, C on the C-chord and G on the G-chord. It sounds like there is an interesting choir part in the background, maybe raise it up?
 
Good work!
2015/11/19 15:30:59
stevec
Nice song!  The arrangement works well IMO and the parts are all solid.  I particularly liked the "chimey" guitar tones.
 
Mix-wise I do agree about the slap-back on the vocal being a little heavy, although I do like the echo at the tail end of each line.   Overall it's a nice clear mix though and everything seems in its place. 
 
2015/11/19 17:49:46
whack
Your vocals are really good and I do hear the U2 type vibe, albeit a more of a country backing. Bit long  for me overall but real good work here
 
Cian
 
 
2015/11/23 02:20:10
garygml
Cheers guys thanx for your input... Im taking in all suggestions & gonna do a remix later....kane the wave sound at the start is tremolo guitar from strum session 
Cheers 
Gary
2015/11/23 02:20:17
garygml
Cheers guys thanx for your input... Im taking in all suggestions & gonna do a remix later....kane the wave sound at the start is tremolo guitar from strum session 
Cheers 
Gary
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