Hey PiBoy, I'm not familiar with this style, but I can tell you what I like.
The vocals are laid back. Not particularly what I would have suggested, I like a little more intensity, but they do match the music bed.
The guitar is cool, I like the single note slow leads. It fits good, none of this faster more is better.
Really like where you go at 6:00, I would have kept going for another minute or so.
The video is very cool. Nice studio, and I wish I could have been there for the backyard party! Nice grill fella!
Dang, looks like you had fun doing this with your friends.
The visuals lend a lot to this piece.
Nice
Jesse